Wednesday, 22 October 2014

Story idea, first 3 minutes

Story idea, first 3 minuets.


Detective Morris walks out of the dinning room and stands in front of the window of his flat with a can of bear in his hand. Looking out over the buildings into the town life at night. The phone on the side table starts buzzing and light up with an unknown number. He walks over and picks up the phone and answers it. Over the phone he is told to go to a location at a certain time, As we hear the voice is sounds deep and robotic. Whilst on the phone the camera switch to the other end of a phone where it is a dark room with the only light coming from the computer screens along a wall, which are showing different cameras. We see a dark figure from behind sat in a computer chair in front of a screen with smoke blowing over his shoulder. The camera then cuts to some dark woods with a figure running through the trees looking over their shoulder. Detective Morris then shoves the phone in his pocket and runs over to his coat rack and pulls his coat off and runs out of the door slamming it behind him. We then see the person running again, they then run out of the woods but towards a lake the halt and run along the banking into a small patch of trees where they slide onto the flaw and hide in a small bush. We then see the dark turn to day and detective Morris walks onto the scene and walks over to the patch of trees and sees the dead body in the bush, his eyes widen as he realises who is laid there his phone rings again and we see the man on the other end and tells him another location and time but this time to go alone or his wife and second child will be killed.          

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